Tuesday, October 6, 2015

Lonely girl


Bigger than a Bread Box                  10/5/15
By: laurel Snyder 

             I predict that Becca is going to have no friends because when she was doing the monkey bars she couldn't make it half way and dome of the girls that she started to be friends with could do the monkey bars. So they walked away with a disgusted face on. I think at least one of the girls that Becca was almost friends with should have stayed with her and gave her tips on the monkey bars, so they can become friends. The new ending would be that Becca is really popular and all the girls and boys at her school are friends with her.

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